In a fight between the Technical Documentation Style Guide and this document, this document wins for all Academy-related content.
Editing Scripts
Conversational Voice
The scripts will, of course, be spoken aloud. The Ed-Fi Alliance is going for a conversational tone, speaking as one might speak to a colleague or event attendee (as opposed to a formal lecture).
Pause-for-Breath Comma
A note directed at editors: In the script text, it's useful to include commas to suggest a pause in speaking or a pause for breath in voiceover. So, err on the side of leaving commas inline, they may be intentional.